find the error

Submitted by Anonymous on Sat, 11/28/2009 - 14:38

Hi all,

I like this site, and the way they explain with cartoons,,,,so fun

there is an error analysis question and i figured all of them except for one....!! could u help me

John was calling 911 when he saw the car accident.

thanks and waiting for ur reply, :)



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Submitted by Admin on Fri, 12/18/2009 - 00:31.

"John was calling 911 when he saw the car accident."

It should be: "When John saw the car accident, he called 911"